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May 30, 2005 16:22:39 GMT -5
Post by Revan on May 30, 2005 16:22:39 GMT -5
Well, here's the story fit into script form. And just forget the original chapters. Those were just tests.
Star Wars Mort Saga- Draft SCRIPT
[Opening Logos]
Scene I: Beginning Credits [Star Wars beginning theme] STAR WARS MORT SAGA
It’s been 2 since Order 66 was issued and the GALACTIC EMPIRE rose to power. The Imperial Military drafted several citizens into its ranks. Though the Empire rose high in it’s numbers, some of them rebelled. They did not like the EMPEROR’S ways of torturing the galaxy with his dark ways.
Though there are few JedI left, still they regain strength. Ex-JedI Master Karag Drakas, who retired from the Empire when it was born, wants to be left alone and not remember what happened to the Old Republic.
He still hasn’t realized that he can’t escape his past. Later when he arrives on Talus, he meets and old friend and accepts a mission that will change is life forever and always. He refuses help on his mission, because he can no longer trust anyone, but he doesn’t understand that he needs friends to survive the attacks from the evil IMPERIAL attackers…….
Scene I Part II: [Camera slowly comes downwards and shows a planet in the distance. A tie fighter flies toward the planet. The ship passes and maneuvers through the docks and heads toward the surface of the planet, and lands at the star port. The Pilot jumps out with a cloak and JedI clothing underneath it, all black. He heads out the front door of the building]
Karag: This planet doesn’t look like much. I must keep my guard up just incase my enemy tries to flank me. I’m lucky to be disguised as an Imperial.
[Karag heads to the cantina, walks through the front door, and continues his way towards the bar. As he walks by, the entertained group is distracted by a mysterious figure, and gives him a strange look until he actually reaches the bar -Cantina Music begins as he enters and continuously plays throughout the rest of the scene]
Karag: It seems I have drawn some attention. I’d best be careful. Bartender: It’s ok bub, they always give that look to new people. Would you like anything to drink, kind sir? Karag: Ya, give me a cup of Jawa juice.
[Karag gives the bartender the credits to pay for his drink. Karag notices a guy to the right corner of his right eye. The man has a cybernetic right arm replacement and is holding a cup of an alcoholic beverage tight within his grasp. Karag walks over to buy him a drink]
Karag: Hmmm, you look familiar, don’t I know you from somewhere? Mort: Nope, I don’t think you know me at all. [He tries not to remember his past] Karag: Are you sure? I think I remember you…….from the Clone Wars, you served under me. Mort: Hahahahahahaha………I served under a pipsqueak like you? Karag: Hey watch who your talking to, Sergeant Mort! Mort: How do you know that name???!? How did you know what rank I was? Karag: JedI’s see all, my clone friend. Mort: General Drakas? Is that really you? Oh my lord, sir, I had no idea! Karag: Mort, you are still funny as you use to be, even during the Battle of Kashyyyk you put the spirit in our soldiers. Mort: Ya, I try. Heh Karag: Ya, you do. May I buy you a drink? Mort: Nah, I had enough already, killed too much brain cells already. Karag: Ya, it looks like that to me, you look drunk enough to do a suicidal flight into a volcano on Mustafar in a Geonosian fighter. Hahaha. Mort: Alright, alright ya got me back……[Laughs out loud] Karag: Mort, I wanna know something…. Mort: Ya, what’s up General? Karag: What really happened after I departed on that Gunship during the Battle of Kashyyyk? Mort: Heh, that one’s a toughy. Are you sure you want to hear this? Karag: Yes, I am sure, I must know. Mort: Well it all started on Kashyyyk….[ Major flashback- Goes back to whatever JA: CW episode that was] Karag: What happened nex…… Mort: SHUSH and let me finish will ya? Karag: Sorry. [Mort’s Past story continues] Karag: Oh SITH SPIT!!! Really? Mort: Yes, really, I should told ya sooner, my friend. I am sorry. Karag: I….I understand Sergeant. Mort: I have to give you a request, from an old friend. Karag: Oh great, just when I was getting time off of my hands. [sighs] Mort: This mission is just a request. You don’t have to accept, but I just want this simple favor………<br>Karag: You want me to go and assassinate this guy, right? Mort: Killing him is not necessary unless required to do so. Karag: Ok, cause killing is not the JedI way. Mort: I suggest you get more into your light saber skills, you’ll need ‘em if you are going to survive this conflict. Karag: Wise decision, but, where am I supposed to go? Mort: Don’t ask me! I am not a JedI, you know! Karag: Ok, no hard feelings…. Mort: Ok, but please do hurry, I hear heavy footsteps outside, sounds like a Stormtrooper squad. Karag: No worries, I have it taken care of……see ya, my old buddy. Mort: See you later, and try not to get yourself killed.
[End scene- any transition goes here]
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May 30, 2005 16:24:09 GMT -5
Post by Revan on May 30, 2005 16:24:09 GMT -5
Scene II: Cantina Fight
Karag: Oh, I have a bad feeling about this! Stormtrooper Captain: Are you the JedI the Emperor told us to come and kill? Karag: I’m an ex-jedI, Captain! Stormtrooper Captain: Well, I still can’t disobey orders, I must terminate you immediately! Karag: I don’t think so…………[JedI mind trick] I am not the JedI you’re looking for. Stormtrooper Captain: You are not the JedI we’re loo……HEY WAIT A MINUTE, you’re using a damned JedI mind trick on me!!! Karag: Damn [Karag whispers]. Well, Captain, I have no other choice, but to defend myself. [Karag carefully reaches for his Lightsaber] Stormtrooper Captain: You’re making a bad choice of rebelling! I will make sure you’re put down, personally…..hehehe. Karag: Sad waste of life. [-track: impbaseb_action.mp3- A big firefight fills the front of the cantina. Karag killing and striking down storm troopers left to right, making his way to the front door. A storm trooper miss throws a thermal detonator and it heads for his fellow team members. Karag jumps out side through the door before the explosion. Karag makes his way to the star port to receive his ship, but unfortunately his ship is in the middle of a Battalion of Imperial troopers. So he searches the Star port for another ship, til he comes to an unsupervised JedI Interceptor (ep3 jedI starfighter). He notices that it was his old one during the Clone wars. He thought it was destroyed during some of his experience on the planet of Mygeeto, a separatist held planet. He helped some of Master Ki-adi Mundi’s men psuh forward and defeat some of the separatist forces shortly before Order 66, as well as some of Aayla Secura’s troops on the planet Fellicia. But when Order 66 arrived, it was the hardest of times. After every JedI victims’ deaths, Karag weakened, very much like Yoda. - Track: Ep3 Ad1.mp3 - Karag flies off into the darkness of space]
Karag: Why did it have to come to Order 66?
[End scene- any transition goes here]
Scene III: Emperor and Vader talk.
[Track: Emperor’s Throne room.mp3]
Vader: You wished to see me, my master? Emperor: Yes, lord Vader. It seems that we have a new “Enemy”. Vader: Yes, my master, I have felt it too. This Drakas character. Emperor: I thought you ELIMINATED him! Vader: I thought I did too, my lord. Emperor: Really? Vader: Yes, I felt his life cease during that duel on Fellicia. Emperor: Remember, Lord Vader, the force can sometimes trick you. This JedI should’ve been killed during Order 66. Vader: He is an Exile, Emperor, so he shouldn’t be allowed to weld a light saber anymore, or even use the force. Emperor: We shall see. I want you to find him, and end his life quick. Vader: I have something “else” in mind………. [Both laugh]
[end scene- Music fades out- slide transition comes in]
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May 30, 2005 16:25:19 GMT -5
Post by Revan on May 30, 2005 16:25:19 GMT -5
Scene IV: Arrival on Dathomir [JedI Interceptor Platform exits hyperspace. The small ship unlocks and heads toward the planet. Shortly after arrival, Karag is in a small village surrounded by a force aura shield, (after he gets off his swoop that is) he spots wounded and dead force sensitive villagers as he walks by. sad music plays- I don’t care as long as it’s touching to the moment- Karag walks toward one of the villagers and checks on his status (the villager is dead). Then a villager, very upset about the stunning attack that happened earlier that morning, shouts with all his anger at Karag. He spews obscenities toward him.] Upset Villager: DAMNED you SITH!!! WHY DID YOU DO THIS???!? WHY? ?!!!!!!!!! HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO US? WE WERE DEFENSELESS! You damned pirates will pay for your evil doings! Karag: But, young villager, I am no SITH. And I surely wouldn’t murder villagers or any people who couldn’t defend themselves. [Remembers what happened to the younglings at the JedI temple on Coruscant- tears come to his eyes.] Who could’ve done such a terrible deed? Upset Villager: If you didn’t kill us, then, I’m sorry. I’m just terribly upset on to what happened to my wife and children. Could you be our defender? OUR SAVIOR?!?!?! Karag: I will be more then happy to serve someone in need of help. Upset Villager: Oh thank you! Thank you so much. Karag: It’s no problem, really. How old were your children? Upset Villager: My oldest daughter is 18 and my youngest is 16. Karag: What do you remember on what happened to them? Upset Villager: I saw them collapse in front of my eyes! Blasted to death were the both of them. Then the SITH captured my wife and took her to some other planet…no, wait…..a facility on an Asteroid, in the Kashyyyk system. Karag: Ok, after I leave I will search for her. If I find her and she’s alive I will bring her back here. Upset Villager: That would be truly thankful. Here, take this. You’ll need it more than I will. It has brought me a lot of luck, well until now, but it will surely help you, kind JedI. Karag: A HOLOCRON?!!!!!?? Where did you get th…… [The villager leaves without a trace, and young Karag stands there with a HOLOCRON in his left hand and his light saber in his right. But all of a sudden, a blaster sounded off and a bolt flew closely pass Karag’s head] Sith Pirate Commander: You? What are yous doing here! This is our turf now, not yurs you JEDI scum! [End scene- change camera position for next scene]
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May 30, 2005 16:26:53 GMT -5
Post by Revan on May 30, 2005 16:26:53 GMT -5
Scene V: Battle of Aurillia [Music about to fade in] Karag: Your turf? HAHA SITH don’t deserve a "turf" after they did a slaughter of an entire village! This Village still remains under care of the Rebel Alliance and the JEDI will protect it! Sith Pirate Commander: Don’t make me laugh. You are just a puny little JEDI idiot and have no brains to stand up to the greatest SITH army of all time!!!!! Karag: Well, you don’t look like much of an ARMY. Sith Pirate Commander: What do ya mean??? Karag: This! [Karag pulls out his light saber and activates it in Strong stance] Sith Pirate Commander: You fool! Men, prepare to open fire on this imbecile!!! Karag: Again this is a sad waste of life......... Sith Pirate Commander: Wha? [track- impbaseb_action.mp3 -A firefight erupts in the center of the village. People ran inside their huts for cover and safety. Karag is busy slashing left and right striking down Sith troopers. The fight was on Karags side………for now] [End scene] Scene VI: The Duel of the Fates
Malakai: Master Karag, I knew I’d find you here…..here helping weak old villagers with no knowledge of the FORCE!!! Karag: Darth Malakai, I knew I’d see you fly in to try and kill me, with all the darkness in your soul! Malakai: [Sarcastic] With the darkness in my soul……….hmmmmm…….isn’t that why I am known as Darth Malakai? Karag: Don’t you argue with me!! If you are here to kill me, then do what you must!!! Malakai: That’s the plan, my old friend. Karag: Yes, you are starting to sound more like Anakin when he turned, or should I call him Darth Vader? Malakai: Anakin is dead! Don’t you bring up that name again, or I shall do worse then just kill you! Karag: Like what? Kill yourself? Wait you’re already dead! Malakai: You think you’re so funny don’t you? NO, I know where Master Kenobi is at…….I could leave you here wounded and easily go kill Obi-wan just like that! Karag: I won’t allow you to do that! Take my life instead, MY OLD APPRENTICE!!!!!!! Malakai: Then let’s do this!
[Malakai pulls out his light saber staff (two bladed red saber J) and activates it. Karag pulls out his saber and activates his as well. Then the fight begins…….DUEL OF THE FATES.]
Karag: I WILL strike you down if I have to!! Malakai: You will try, my old friend!!!
[Sabers clash (Blue and Red beams) Saber Katas continuously go and striking each others beams. All sorts of special attacks and normal swings go on against each other. Karag comes in and knocks Malakai down and is about to slay Malakai with his blade, but Malakai counter attacks and hits Karag away. Sabers clash until a minute or so]
Malakai: Get me if you can!
[Malakai jumps into his ship and leaves. Karag is on his knees with his saber still active.]
Karag: Oh I will, I will get you some time. You are NOT invincible, as neither am I. We will meet again!!!!
[Karag falls to the ground, unconscious. He is still alive, but knocked out. He still won the day. The Village of Aurillia is safe. Karag was a savior, a guardian of the LIGHT!]
[End season]
[Credits]
(This film was a JedI Outcast Movies Production and an Evolution Pictures film)
Stay tuned for Season 2!
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Jun 1, 2005 11:56:43 GMT -5
Post by Revan on Jun 1, 2005 11:56:43 GMT -5
The long awaited season 2 is here! Well ok it hasn't been that long. LOL Season 2: Scene 1 of 5 [Opening Logos] [-track: Star Wars and the Revenge of the Sith at 1 min 16 secs (Starts as the ship flies pass the screen)- A black and red JEDI Interceptor flies pass the screen, closely followed by a Rescue Transport. As smart as the pilot was in the small fighter, he could cloak his approach of the Avatar Platform.] Karag: R4, cloak our approach of the Avatar Platform. I don’t want any unwanted attention. [R4 beeps positively] Rescue Transport: General Karag, are you sure your plan will work? Karag: I am positive, Commander. R4, Jam transmissions. [Beep blip bloop, R4 beeps outloud] Rescue Transport: Avatar Platform landing pad dead ahead, General. Karag: Yes, I see. Whew I’m glad they haven’t detected us yet. [Meanwhile on the Avatar Platform] Sith Sergeant: Sir, your plan is working, Karag and the Rescue transport is almost here. We can then ambush them and….. Malakai Hologram: Good, good, but do not attack yet. When they split up, only then is the time to strike. I want the JEDI alive Sergeant! ------------ Karag: Landing procedures! [Karag’s ship lands, and the Rescue transport successfully docks] Rebel Captain: Sir, we have landed and deployed in full stealth. Are we ready to create the diversion? Karag: Yes, but be on your guard. I sense something wrong…. Rebel Captain: Yes, sir. Delta squad, go down north corridor! Alpha group come with me. Bravo and Charlie, stay here. [all soldiers reply with “Yes, sir!” or “Right away, captain!” They carry out their orders. The soldiers tend to think that their plan is working perfectly, but what they do not realize is…is that they fell into a trap] Karag: I have a bad feeling about this.
Karag: What is it trooper? Trooper?!?
[An old confederacy Super Battle Droid comes out. With very advanced modifications. Like if it were some sort of tank, blew through both squads of Rebel Alliance Elite Troopers]
Karag: This is bad!!!
Karag: Troopers, I suggest you guys ready the transport. I won’t be long. Defend the transport….AND MY FIGHTER at all cost! I need to find the girl and rescue some wookiee prisoners. Thank goodness I have some bow casters with me.
Rebel Sergeant: I would like to come with you, sir! Karag: Are you sure you’re up to the test? Rebel Sergeant: Yes, sir. Karag: Then let’s go, we do not have a lot of time left. Rebel Sergeant: Right behind ya, sir!
[Karag and the Sergeant run down the corridor to the detention blocks, and find wookiees in them, including the girl.]
Karag: Why would the Sith and the Trandoshan slavers want these wookiees? Sergeant: I have no idea, sir. Karag: We need to go to the nearest console to open up all cells on this level! Sergeant: Well, there’s a power box right there, I could hack into it if ya want….. Karag: Hmmmm, good idea. I’ll cover you. Sergeant: Alright let’s get down to business.
[Karag activates his light saber in a defensive form. Trandoshans and Sith with swords and sabers come from everywhere. Including rifle infantry and anti-armor. Karag never seen a massive force that big before- Well, except when he went back to Coruscant and found the Temple in ruins.]
Karag: Almost done? Sergeant: Ya, ya hold your streeds. Karag: Well, hurry, because, I think they’re sending heavier equipment at us. Super Battle Droid 1: Get the JEDI! Super Battle Droid 2: Roger, roger! Karag: It would be nice to know how the progress is going along. Sergeant: Got it, go, go, go!!
[The prisoners are unleashed and follow Karag and the sergeant to the ships. The woman also is in the protection of the wookiees. Lasers fly and keep flying until the prisoners including the woman are on board the transport]
Karag: Go, go! Fly off, I’ll get out soon! I just need to take care of something. GO!!!!
[The ship flies off…….and Karag is left behind to do his unfinished business.]
[End scene]
Enjoy my brethren! Scene 2 tomorrow or later tonight.
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Jun 23, 2005 13:00:59 GMT -5
Post by Yadal on Jun 23, 2005 13:00:59 GMT -5
Scene I Part II: [Camera slowly comes downwards and shows a planet in the distance. A tie fighter flies toward the planet. The ship passes and maneuvers through the docks and heads toward the surface of the planet, and lands at the star port. The Pilot jumps out with a cloak and JedI clothing underneath it, all black[glow=red,2,300]Do we see his face or any body features or just the back. [/glow]He heads out the front door of the building] Karag:[glow=red,2,300]Does he say this to the camera?[/glow]This planet doesn’t look like much. I must keep my guard up just incase my enemy tries to flank me. I’m lucky to be disguised as an Imperial. [Karag heads to the cantina, walks through the front door, and continues his way towards the bar. As he walks by, the entertained group is distracted by a mysterious figure, and gives him a strange look until he actually reaches the bar -Cantina Music begins as he enters and continuously plays throughout the rest of the scene] Karag: It seems I have drawn some attention. I’d best be careful. Bartender: It’s ok bub, they always give that look to new comers. Would you like anything to drink, mate? Karag: Oh er sure, gimme a cup of Jawa juice. [Karag gives the bartender the credits to pay for his drink.[glow=red,2,300]maybe here have a kind of exchange like "that'll be 45 creds plz mate!" "one sec buddy *hands over 95 creds* keep the change." "why thankyou kind sir!". *while lifting his drink?*[/glow]Karag notices a guy to the right corner of his right eye. The man has a cybernetic right arm replacement and is holding a cup of an alcoholic beverage tight within his grasp. Karag walks over to buy him a drink] Karag:Hey i seen you before, do I know you? Mort: Er, I doubt that sir, possibly someone else. [He tries not to remember his past] Karag: You sure? ...You fight in the cloner wars?. Mort: AHAHAHAH ...ehe...you think I would even consider serveing under a weakling like you!? Karag: You watch you mouth.....Sergeant Mort! Mort: *gasping*.........How do you know my name!?.....n' my rank! Karag: Jedi's see a lot, *as a after thought*and have good memorys my lil clone friend. Mort: Wait....I remember your voice now your...your General Drakos, man im sorry ol buddy! Karag: Mort, your wit hasn't dwindled at all, even through our adventure on kashykk you still kept the men in good spirits.. Mort: What can i say? Karag: I don't know old friend, I don't know! May I buy you a drink? Mort: Man if I had one more, I wouldn't be able to fire my gun anymore due to the killing of brain cells. Karag: Yer, you look like youv'e lost enough to do a suicidal flight into a volcano on Mustafar in a Geonosian fighter. Hahaha. Mort: Alright, you got me there ol buddy……[Laughs out loud] Karag: Mort, I wanna know something…. Mort: Shoot General! Karag: What really happened after we got seprated near that Gunship during the Battle of Kashyyyk? Mort: Heh, that one’s a toughy. Are you sure you want to hear this? Karag: Yes, I am sure, I must know. Mort: Well it all started on Kashyyyk….[ Major flashback- Goes back to whatever JA: CW episode that was] Karag: What happened nex…… Mort: patence never was your thing was it JUST let me finish will ya? Karag: Sorry. [Mort’s Past story continues] Karag: Oh SITH SPIT!!! Really? Mort: Yes, really, I should a' told ya sooner, old buddy. So sorry. Karag: I forgive you, Sergeant. Mort: I need to ask a favour, from an old friend. Karag: Trust you to ask for favours when im on leave. [sighs] Mort: This mission is just a request. You don’t have to accept, but I just want this simple favor………<br>Karag: You want me to go and assassinate this guy, right? Mort: Killing him is not necessary in all scenairos. Karag: Yer sure, just cos killing is not the JedI way. [glow=red,2,300]I get the feeling the feeling mort can't use the saber??!?![/glow]Mort: I suggest you get more into your light saber skills, you’ll need ‘em if you are going to survive this conflict. Karag: Wise decision, but, where am I supposed to go? Mort: Don’t ask me! I am not a JedI, you know! Karag: Ok, no hard feelings…. Mort: Ok, but please do hurry, I hear heavy footsteps outside, sounds like a Stormtrooper squad. Karag: No worries, I have it taken care of……good luck, my old friend. Mort: See you later, and try not to get yourself killed. [End scene- any transition goes here]
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Jun 23, 2005 13:08:40 GMT -5
Post by Revan on Jun 23, 2005 13:08:40 GMT -5
Nice man, best ever (what I think) :> hehe
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Jun 23, 2005 13:10:04 GMT -5
Post by Yadal on Jun 23, 2005 13:10:04 GMT -5
Let it be known the real script writer is back!
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Jun 23, 2005 13:22:55 GMT -5
Post by Revan on Jun 23, 2005 13:22:55 GMT -5
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Jun 30, 2005 12:46:00 GMT -5
Post by Revan on Jun 30, 2005 12:46:00 GMT -5
Scene I Part II: [Camera slowly comes downwards and shows a planet in the distance. A tie fighter flies toward the planet. The ship passes and maneuvers through the docks and heads toward the surface of the planet, and lands at the star port. The Pilot jumps out with a cloak and JedI clothing underneath it, all black[glow=red,2,300]Do we see his face or any body features or just the back. [/glow]He heads out the front door of the building] Karag:[glow=red,2,300]Does he say this to the camera?[/glow]This planet doesn’t look like much. I must keep my guard up just incase my enemy tries to flank me. I’m lucky to be disguised as an Imperial. [Karag heads to the cantina, walks through the front door, and continues his way towards the bar. As he walks by, the entertained group is distracted by a mysterious figure, and gives him a strange look until he actually reaches the bar -Cantina Music begins as he enters and continuously plays throughout the rest of the scene] Karag: It seems I have drawn some attention. I’d best be careful. Bartender: It’s ok bub, they always give that look to new comers. Would you like anything to drink, mate? Karag: Oh er sure, gimme a cup of Jawa juice. [Karag gives the bartender the credits to pay for his drink.[glow=red,2,300]maybe here have a kind of exchange like "that'll be 45 creds plz mate!" "one sec buddy *hands over 95 creds* keep the change." "why thankyou kind sir!". *while lifting his drink?*[/glow]Karag notices a guy to the right corner of his right eye. The man has a cybernetic right arm replacement and is holding a cup of an alcoholic beverage tight within his grasp. Karag walks over to buy him a drink] Karag:Hey i seen you before, do I know you? Mort: Er, I doubt that sir, possibly someone else. [He tries not to remember his past] Karag: You sure? ...You fight in the cloner wars?. Mort: AHAHAHAH ...ehe...you think I would even consider serveing under a weakling like you!? Karag: You watch you mouth.....Sergeant Mort! Mort: *gasping*.........How do you know my name!?.....n' my rank! Karag: Jedi's see a lot, *as a after thought*and have good memorys my lil clone friend. Mort: Wait....I remember your voice now your...your General Drakos, man im sorry ol buddy! Karag: Mort, your wit hasn't dwindled at all, even through our adventure on kashykk you still kept the men in good spirits.. Mort: What can i say? Karag: I don't know old friend, I don't know! May I buy you a drink? Mort: Man if I had one more, I wouldn't be able to fire my gun anymore due to the killing of brain cells. Karag: Yer, you look like youv'e lost enough to do a suicidal flight into a volcano on Mustafar in a Geonosian fighter. Hahaha. Mort: Alright, you got me there ol buddy……[Laughs out loud] Karag: Mort, I wanna know something…. Mort: Shoot General! Karag: What really happened after we got seprated near that Gunship during the Battle of Kashyyyk? Mort: Heh, that one’s a toughy. Are you sure you want to hear this? Karag: Yes, I am sure, I must know. Mort: Well it all started on Kashyyyk….[ Major flashback- Goes back to whatever JA: CW episode that was] Karag: What happened nex…… Mort: patence never was your thing was it JUST let me finish will ya? Karag: Sorry. [Mort’s Past story continues] Karag: Oh SITH SPIT!!! Really? Mort: Yes, really, I should a' told ya sooner, old buddy. So sorry. Karag: I forgive you, Sergeant. Mort: I need to ask a favour, from an old friend. Karag: Trust you to ask for favours when im on leave. [sighs] Mort: This mission is just a request. You don’t have to accept, but I just want this simple favor………<br>Karag: You want me to go and assassinate this guy, right? Mort: Killing him is not necessary in all scenairos. Karag: Yer sure, just cos killing is not the JedI way. [glow=red,2,300]I get the feeling the feeling mort can't use the saber??!?![/glow]Mort: I suggest you get more into your light saber skills, you’ll need ‘em if you are going to survive this conflict. Karag: Wise decision, but, where am I supposed to go? Mort: Don’t ask me! I am not a JedI, you know! Karag: Ok, no hard feelings…. Mort: Ok, but please do hurry, I hear heavy footsteps outside, sounds like a Stormtrooper squad. Karag: No worries, I have it taken care of……good luck, my old friend. Mort: See you later, and try not to get yourself killed. [End scene- any transition goes here] Ok, where you said: Do we see his face or any body features or just the back. Well, since he is wearing all black.....let's go with not being able to see the face or hands, just a cloaked figure that walks toward the cantina. Does he say this to the camera? Answer: Ya, I guess so......just while we film this episode, we need to make it look good. LOl maybe here have a kind of exchange like "that'll be 45 creds plz mate!" "one sec buddy *hands over 95 creds* keep the change." "why thankyou kind sir!". *while lifting his drink?* Great idea.....better than mine....LOL I get the feeling the feeling mort can't use the saber??!?! Why would an EX-clone commando use a lightsaber? Karag: Yer, you look like youv'e lost enough to do a suicidal flight into a volcano on Mustafar in a Geonosian fighter. Hahaha. Hmmm......change the quote a little....I don't like what I thought of on that one Maybe...... Karag: Yer, you look drunk enough to walk right into a gundark nest.
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Jun 30, 2005 12:56:09 GMT -5
Post by Yadal on Jun 30, 2005 12:56:09 GMT -5
Scene II: Cantina Fight Karag: Oh, I have a bad feeling about this! Stormtrooper Captain: [glow=red,2,300]We have orders to kill you, jedi scum![/glow] Karag: [glow=red,2,300]Im a Ex-Jedi, (as a sly afterthought) Captain ![/glow] Stormtrooper Captain: [glow=red,2,300]Well, that means you were once a jedi so I think we will carry on.......![/glow] Karag: I don’t think so…………[JedI mind trick] I am not the Jedi you’re looking for. Stormtrooper Captain: You are not the JedI we’re loo……[glow=red,2,300]WAIT JUST ONE SECOND, you used a dirty mind trick on me!!![/glow] Karag: Damn [Karag whispers]. Well, Captain, I have no other choice, but to defend myself. [Karag carefully reaches for his Lightsaber] Stormtrooper Captain: [glow=red,2,300]As you wish, Jedi scum (aragont laughter)[/glow]. [-track: impbaseb_action.mp3- A big firefight fills the front of the cantina. Karag killing and striking down storm troopers left to right, making his way to the front door. A storm trooper miss throws a thermal detonator and it heads for his fellow team members. Karag jumps out side through the door before the explosion. Karag makes his way to the star port to receive his ship, but unfortunately his ship is in the middle of a Battalion of Imperial troopers. So he searches the Star port for another ship, til he comes to an unsupervised JedI Interceptor (ep3 jedI starfighter). He notices that it was his old one during the Clone wars. He thought it was destroyed during some of his experience on the planet of Mygeeto, a separatist held planet. He helped some of Master Ki-adi Mundi’s men psuh forward and defeat some of the separatist forces shortly before Order 66, as well as some of Aayla Secura’s troops on the planet . But when Order 66 arrived, it was the hardest of times. After every JedI victims’ deaths, Karag weakened, very much like Yoda. - Track: Ep3 Ad1.mp3 - Karag flies off into the darkness of space] Karag: ...Order 66......Tragic........ [End scene- any transition goes here] Scene III: Emperor and Vader talk. [Track: Emperor’s Throne room.mp3] Vader: [glow=red,2,300] You called[/glow], my master? Emperor: Yes, lord Vader. It seems that we have a new [glow=red,2,300]adversary[/glow] Vader: Yes, my master, I [glow=red,2,300]senced it to, someone by the name of Drakos[/glow] Emperor: [glow=red,2,300]Drakos....shouldn't....he..be...ELIMINATED?!?[/glow] Vader: [glow=red,2,300]I thought he died[/glow]. Emperor:[glow=red,2,300]Explain?[/glow] Vader: [glow=red,2,300]Yes, I felt him ease into the living force after that duel on Fellicia.[/glow] Emperor: [glow=red,2,300]The force can decieve the best of us. This Jedi should have died back when i executed order 66.[/glow] Vader: He is an Exile, [glow=red,2,300]my Lord, thus he will have had his lightsaber taken from him by the council. His ability to use the force must be deminished by now.[/glow] Emperor: [glow=red,2,300] Thats what you think, a jedi can easily reconstruct one. Just find him and end his pitious existance.[/glow] Vader: [glow=red,2,300] Oh......kill may not be enough......[/glow] [Both laugh] [end scene- Music fades out- slide transition comes in]
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Jun 30, 2005 13:03:44 GMT -5
Post by Revan on Jun 30, 2005 13:03:44 GMT -5
HOLY F'IN AWESOME DUDE.......YOU HAVE MORE CREATIVITY THAN I EVER HAD!!!!
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Jun 30, 2005 13:12:17 GMT -5
Post by Yadal on Jun 30, 2005 13:12:17 GMT -5
Im gonna be a director when I grow up............can ya tell?
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Jun 30, 2005 13:21:56 GMT -5
Post by Revan on Jun 30, 2005 13:21:56 GMT -5
LOL I could've told myself that when I joined JOM, really. great job
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Jun 30, 2005 13:22:56 GMT -5
Post by Yadal on Jun 30, 2005 13:22:56 GMT -5
heh how come?
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