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Post by Revan on Dec 15, 2005 12:07:34 GMT -5
Episode 9:
(camera shows To’hren kneeling to Darth Cils hologram. Shortly he gets up.) To’hren: Master, the clones are ready for departure, not to mention the countless clones of Dark Jedi I threw in the mix. Cils: Very good, very good… you have done well, my young apprentice, now Lord To’hren, go and bring piece to the Sith race, crush all resistance. The Republic must fall! The Sith will take over now… muhahahaha. To’hren: Very well, master, I will take the breath out of them! I will do your bidding with honor… this will be very pleasing I sense. Cils: Probably not as pleasing as killing a few jedi earlier…
(To’hren closes his fist) To’hren: Consider them dead….
(Camera cuts back to Korriban) Drak’nar: I have a baaaaad feeling about this… Joe: We all do…. Drak’nar: Something has occurred to me, why does everyone say that everytime? Joe: I have no idea, let’s return to the matter at hand… Dak: Agreed… we need to pay close attention to our surroundings, we don’t know what’ll happen. (as soon as that is said, 4 dark jedi jump down at them) D.Jedi: Prepare yourselves… for you are about to be annihilated….
(They all get in their fighting stances) Drak’nar: Well… this can’t be good….
[End episode 9]
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Post by joe on Dec 15, 2005 17:12:48 GMT -5
Jolle: Get them
we rust in to battle we kill them all
Joe: Lets get out of here
as we ran out draknar picked up the dark jedis saber
-Bastilas ship hurled out of light speed.-
She laned and met with carth and candrous
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Post by joe on Jun 25, 2006 18:31:48 GMT -5
Carth: Bastila your here good now.
a Mando walked up to Carth
Mando: Carth we got a HUGE single coming towards dunx but I don't think its Dunx they want its onderon they probably will attack us first cause they no were here.
Bastila: I do sense something big something.
Their were several mandos running around they have their weapons.
Carth: I'm gonna warn Onderon
Carth walks away.
(Joe)
We walked out of the Jedi temple Jeff had a weird look on his face. We got in the ship and flew off. Back to Dantoonie Just to our luck Sith Fighters where closing in on us.
Jeff: Oh Shit
Jeff got to the guns and started shooting like crazy. Our Shields were low.
Jolle: its ok were fine Dak their is a transmission get it, Joe keep flying.
Sith Trooper: zzzz crackle* Target Dunx super zzzzlazer firezz in 20 mins.
Joe: BY THE FORCE
Joe swerved the ship around and headed to make a jump to light speed. We made the jump and we head for Dunx
(End episode 10)
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Post by General No on Jun 26, 2006 12:03:15 GMT -5
I don't being mean or anything. But Dxun isn't dunx, also your stories ain't all that good joe... Use more "Complicated" words for stories, and clean your gramma! ;D
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Post by joe on Jun 26, 2006 14:44:57 GMT -5
I'll work on the Grammer and I don't know any complated words so just deal with what I can do please I've been posting havent had time to to edit so yea
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Post by General No on Jun 26, 2006 22:14:17 GMT -5
I can maybe add a bit of spice to the words in spare time. I can help with grammer and such, it isn't the best. Yet, it will look neater.
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