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Post by Revan on Jun 21, 2005 15:05:49 GMT -5
Mort’s Actual story
I was bred to be part of one of the Clone Trooper Commando squadrons, elite four man teams causing disruption behind enemy lines. During the battles of Kashyyyk, I and my squadron had one such mission, taking out a command bunker deep inside enemy territory. The mission was going well, it wasn’t the first time we’ve done something like this. We blew up the bunker and was on our way to be extracted when the enemy found us. We notified command we were under attack, but would still be on time at extraction. We worked our way toward it as quickly as we could, dispatching pursuers by the dozens. As we approached the extraction, we saw our LAAT take off. There were barely any enemy left and none at the extraction point, but our commander saw us as expendable clones and would rather lose us than risk a carrier.
(PS-He was the only survivor after his squad dying to the hazardous and dangerous forests. He lost his arm to a creature- god who knows what-.)
We're gonna have to make a few "twists" to it though. I will think of some. Suggestions plz.
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Post by Zappa on Jun 21, 2005 16:50:58 GMT -5
Im sure we can do that. This sounds better anyways.
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Post by Revan on Jun 21, 2005 23:04:12 GMT -5
Good, ^_^
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Post by Zappa on Jun 21, 2005 23:27:24 GMT -5
When can you get a good script started for this?
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Post by Yadal on Jun 22, 2005 11:45:47 GMT -5
Weekend, I have some put some time out specialy for it I just need the full story sent.
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Post by Zappa on Jun 22, 2005 12:22:27 GMT -5
Huh yadal? What do you mean by that?
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Post by Yadal on Jun 22, 2005 12:41:43 GMT -5
........you are joking right?
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Post by Zappa on Jun 22, 2005 12:43:51 GMT -5
umm no, I have no clue what your talking about.
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Post by SmithLord on Jun 22, 2005 13:28:22 GMT -5
I'm not sure, but I get the feeling Yadal may be writing the script. That is kinda the "feel" I get from what he's said so far. Good luck with the script Yadal, would appear to be an intriguing story going on there
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Post by Yadal on Jun 22, 2005 13:29:02 GMT -5
heh yer I thought my post was clear on when i was doing it as well
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Post by Zappa on Jun 22, 2005 13:59:22 GMT -5
I thought revan was writing the script since he has a good concept of what its about.
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Post by SmithLord on Jun 22, 2005 14:11:01 GMT -5
Well, it would appear he's not. But I do agree, it is a good concept.
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Post by Yadal on Jun 22, 2005 14:12:39 GMT -5
Revan did I ask me, only following the clients wishes
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Post by Zappa on Jun 22, 2005 14:13:44 GMT -5
well he never informed me. He just told me he had a good concept and posted that.
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Post by Yadal on Jun 22, 2005 14:14:04 GMT -5
Well origanaly it was just me and him?
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