Yadal's ReScript

[Yadal]

Hey I have taken the liberty to put all the rescripts into this thread. I will probly modify these before we start.


[glow=red,2,300]ENJOY[/glow]


Scene I Part II: [Camera slowly comes downwards and shows a planet in the distance. A tie fighter flies toward the planet. The ship passes and maneuvers through the docks and heads toward the surface of the planet, and lands at the star port. The Pilot jumps out with a cloak and JedI clothing underneath it, all blackDo we see his face or any body features or just the back. He heads out the front door of the building]

Karag:This planet doesn’t look like much. I must keep my guard up just incase my enemy tries to flank me. I’m lucky to be disguised as an Imperial.

[Karag heads to the cantina, walks through the front door, and continues his way towards the bar. As he walks by, the entertained group is distracted by a mysterious figure, and gives him a strange look until he actually reaches the bar -Cantina Music begins as he enters and continuously plays throughout the rest of the scene]

Karag: It seems I have drawn some attention. I’d best be careful.
Bartender: It’s ok bub, they always give that look to new comers. Would you like anything to drink, mate?
Karag: Oh er sure, gimme a cup of Jawa juice.
Bar Keeper: That'll be 45 creds plz mate!
Karag: One sec buddy *hands over 95 creds* keep the change.
Bar Keeper: Why thankyou kind sir!
*while lifting his drink*Karag notices a guy to the right corner of his right eye. The man has a cybernetic right arm replacement and is holding a cup of an alcoholic beverage tight within his grasp. Karag walks over to buy him a drink]

Karag:Hey i seen you before, do I know you?
Mort: Er, I doubt that sir, possibly someone else. [He tries not to remember his past]
Karag: You sure? ...You fight in the cloner wars?.
Mort: AHAHAHAH ...ehe...you think I would even consider serveing under a weakling like you!?
Karag: You watch you mouth.....Sergeant Mort!
Mort: *gasping*.........How do you know my name!?.....n' my rank!
Karag: Jedi's see a lot, *as a after thought*and have good memorys my lil clone friend.
Mort: Wait....I remember your voice now your...your General Drakos, man im sorry ol buddy!
Karag: Mort, your wit hasn't dwindled at all, even through our adventure on kashykk you still kept the men in good spirits..
Mort: What can i say?
Karag: I don't know old friend, I don't know! May I buy you a drink?
Mort: Man if I had one more, I wouldn't be able to fire my gun anymore due to the killing of brain cells.
Karag: Yer, you look like youv'e lost enough to do a suicidal flight into a volcano on Mustafar in a Geonosian fighter. Hahaha.
Mort: Alright, you got me there ol buddy……[Laughs out loud]
Karag: Mort, I wanna know something….
Mort: Shoot General!
Karag: What really happened after we got seprated near that Gunship during the Battle of Kashyyyk?
Mort: Heh, that one’s a toughy. Are you sure you want to hear this?
Karag: Yes, I am sure, I must know.
Mort: Well it all started on Kashyyyk….[ Major flashback- Goes back to whatever JA: CW episode that was]
Karag: What happened nex……
Mort: patence never was your thing was it JUST let me finish will ya?
Karag: Sorry.
[Mort’s Past story continues]
Karag: Oh SITH SPIT!!! Really?
Mort: Yes, really, I should a' told ya sooner, old buddy. So sorry.
Karag: I forgive you, Sergeant.
Mort: I need to ask a favour, from an old friend.
Karag: Trust you to ask for favours when im on leave. [sighs]
Mort: This mission is just a request. You don’t have to accept, but I just want this simple favor………<br>Karag: You want me to go and assassinate this guy, right?
Mort: Killing him is not necessary in all scenairos.
Karag: Yer sure, just cos killing is not the JedI way.
I get the feeling the feeling mort can't use the saber??!?!Mort: I suggest you get more into your light saber skills, you’ll need ‘em if you are going to survive this conflict.
Karag: Wise decision, but, where am I supposed to go?
Mort: Don’t ask me! I am not a JedI, you know!
Karag: Ok, no hard feelings….
Mort: Ok, but please do hurry, I hear heavy footsteps outside, sounds like a Stormtrooper squad.
Karag: No worries, I have it taken care of……good luck, my old friend.
Mort: See you later, and try not to get yourself killed.

[End scene- any transition goes here]

[Yadal]

Scene II: Cantina Fight


Karag: Oh, I have a bad feeling about this!
Stormtrooper Captain: We have orders to kill you, jedi scum!
Karag: Im a Ex-Jedi, (as a sly afterthought) Captain !
Stormtrooper Captain: Well, that means you were once a jedi so I think we will carry on.......!
Karag: I don’t think so…………[JedI mind trick] I am not the Jedi you’re looking for.
Stormtrooper Captain: You are not the JedI we’re loo……WAIT JUST ONE SECOND, you used a dirty mind trick on me!!!
Karag: Damn [Karag whispers]. Well, Captain, I have no other choice, but to defend myself. [Karag carefully reaches for his Lightsaber]
Stormtrooper Captain: As you wish, Jedi scum (aragont laughter).
[-track: impbaseb_action.mp3- A big firefight fills the front of the cantina. Karag killing and striking down storm troopers left to right, making his way to the front door. A storm trooper miss throws a thermal detonator and it heads for his fellow team members. Karag jumps out side through the door before the explosion. Karag makes his way to the star port to receive his ship, but unfortunately his ship is in the middle of a Battalion of Imperial troopers. So he searches the Star port for another ship, til he comes to an unsupervised JedI Interceptor (ep3 jedI starfighter). He notices that it was his old one during the Clone wars. He thought it was destroyed during some of his experience on the planet of Mygeeto, a separatist held planet. He helped some of Master Ki-adi Mundi’s men psuh forward and defeat some of the separatist forces shortly before Order 66, as well as some of Aayla Secura’s troops on the planet . But when Order 66 arrived, it was the hardest of times. After every JedI victims’ deaths, Karag weakened, very much like Yoda. - Track: Ep3 Ad1.mp3 - Karag flies off into the darkness of space]

Karag: ...Order 66......Tragic........

[End scene- any transition goes here]

Scene III: Emperor and Vader talk.

[Track: Emperor’s Throne room.mp3]

Vader: You called, my master?
Emperor: Yes, lord Vader. It seems that we have a new adversary
Vader: Yes, my master, I senced it to, someone by the name of Drakos
Emperor: Drakos....shouldn't....he..be...ELIMINATED?!?
Vader: I thought he died.
Emperor:Explain?
Vader: Yes, I felt him ease into the living force after that duel on Fellicia.
Emperor: The force can decieve the best of us. This Jedi should have died back when i executed order 66.
Vader: He is an Exile, my Lord, thus he will have had his lightsaber taken from him by the council. His ability to use the force must be deminished by now.
Emperor: Thats what you think, a jedi can easily reconstruct one. Just find him and end his pitious existance.
Vader: Oh......kill may not be enough......
[Both laugh]

[end scene- Music fades out- slide transition comes in]

[Yadal]

Scene IV: Arrival on Dathomir

[JedI Interceptor Platform exits hyperspace. The small ship unlocks and heads toward the planet. Shortly after arrival, Karag is in a small village surrounded by a force aura shield, (after he gets off his swoop that is) he spots wounded and dead force sensitive villagers as he walks by. sad music plays- I don’t care as long as it’s touching to the moment- Karag walks toward one of the villagers and checks on his status (the villager is dead). Then a villager, very upset about the stunning attack that happened earlier that morning, shouts with all his anger at Karag. He spews obscenities toward him.]
Upset Villager: CURSE YOU SITH, HOW COULD YOU DO SUCH A EVIL DEED.............YOU, YOU DID IT!
Karag: I am defiantly no sith, and I wouldn't do a thing like that![Remembers what happened to the younglings at the JedI temple on Coruscant- tears come to his eyes.] Sith do such evil evil things
Upset Villager: Sorry I mistoke you for a sith sir, I acted angrily out of what happend to my children.........maybe...you were sent here for a reason.........maybe you will be our savior
Karag: I feel it my duty to protect the defencless and help the needy.
Upset Villager: Bless you sir, thankyou so much, you will not regret this act.
Karag:(feeling a bit embarresed)Its er...no...problem sir......anything.....to help.......(changing the subject) Erm how old were your children?
Upset Villager:[glow=red,2,300] (sobbing) My oldest was 18 (sob sob) and my youngest (sob) was 16 (errupts in a huge crying fit)
Karag: [glow=red,2,300] (comforting) There there what happend to them?
Upset Villager: They were coming home, (sob) and they were shot from behind. (sob sob sob sob) Then before anyone knew it some men in black robes swept down and took my wife away (lots of sobbing)
Karag: Can you rember where they took her.
Villager: I heard one of them say somthin about kashyyk and work camp.....(errupts in sobbing)
Karag: I will go and try and ensure her safe return
Upset Villager: That would be only too kind good sir, here take this lucky charm that has been handed down in my family over centuriesKarag: A JEDI HOLOGRAM......this is amazing where did you get this.....
[when karag looks up he notices the village man has left without any trace what so ever (no footsteps sounds or anything....maybe a swish of air if possibleand young Karag stands there with a HOLOCRON in his left hand and his light saber in his right. But all of a sudden, a blaster sounded off and a bolt flew closely pass Karag’s head]
Sith Acolyte: WHAT ARE YOU DOIN HERE JEDI SCUM, LEAVE NOW THIS IS OUR TURF

[End scene- change camera position for next scene]

[Yadal]

Scene V: Battle of Aurillia

[Music about to fade in]

Karag: TURF HAH This village is under care of the rebel alliance and the Jedi will protect it.
Sith Pirate Commander: Don't make me laugh, you are just a puny jedi, you can not stand against a sith squadren.
Karag: I'll show you how good your "squadren" is.
Sith Pirate Commander: Whats that supposed to mean?!
Karag: Watch, and die

[Karag pulls out his light saber and activates it in Strong stance]

Sith Pirate Commander: Hah you think you can stand against us? Men open fire
Karag: Such a sad waste of life
Sith Pirate Commander: Wha?

[track- impbaseb_action.mp3 -A firefight erupts in the center of the village. People ran inside their huts for cover and safety. Karag is busy slashing left and right striking down Sith troopers. The fight was on Karags side………for now]

[End scene]

Scene VI: The Duel of the Fates



Malakai: If it isn't my old master,helping weak old villagers.
Karag: Darth Malakai, I knew you'd return some day and try and get me
Malakai:(mocking) "Try and get me" HAH My powers have tripled since we last met
Karag: Don't you mock me, gonna try and kill me ?
Malakai: That’s the plan, my old friend.
Karag: This reminds me of when anikan turned on his master, or should i call him (Sarcasticly) Darth Vader
Malakai: ANIKAN SKYWALKER IS NO MORE, MENTION HIM AGAIN AND I SHALL DO WORSE THAN KILL YOU!
Karag: (mockingly) oooooo a fate worser than death?
Malakai: You think you’re so funny don’t you? I could wound you then go and kill your old friend.......obi wan!
Karag: I won't allow that, take my life instead......if you can![/glow]
Malakai: Then lets finish this!

[Malakai pulls out his light saber staff (two bladed red saber J) and activates it. Karag pulls out his saber and activates his as well. Then the fight begins…….DUEL OF THE FATES.]

Karag: You will die!
Malakai: You will try, my old friend!!!

[Sabers clash (Blue and Red beams) Saber Katas continuously go and striking each others beams. All sorts of special attacks and normal swings go on against each other. Karag comes in and knocks Malakai down and is about to slay Malakai with his blade, but Malakai counter attacks and hits Karag away. Sabers clash until a minute or so]

Malakai: Try and catch me little JEDI

[Malakai jumps into his ship and leaves. Karag is on his knees with his saber still active.]

Karag: [glow=red,2,300]Oh I will, whereever you go I will find you. YOU ARE NOT IMMORTAL. We will meet again!

[Karag falls to the ground, unconscious. He is still alive, but knocked out. He still won the day. The Village of Aurillia is safe. Karag was a savior, a guardian of the LIGHT!]

[End season]

[Credits]

(This film was a JedI Outcast Movies Production and an Evolution Pictures film)

Stay tuned for Season 2!

[Yadal]

The long awaited season 2 is here! Well ok it hasn't been that long. LOL

Season 2: Scene 1 of 5

[Opening Logos]

[-track: Star Wars and the Revenge of the Sith at 1 min 16 secs (Starts as the ship flies pass the screen)- A black and red JEDI Interceptor flies pass the screen, closely followed by a Rescue Transport. As smart as the pilot was in the small fighter, he could cloak his approach of the Avatar Platform.]

Karag: R9 cloak our position, we wouldn't want to attract attention.
[R9 beeps positively]
Rescue Transport: General Karag sir, are you sure this will work?
Karag: Certainly, R9, jam all transmissions
[Beep blip bloop, R9 beeps outloud]
Rescue Transport: Avatar Platform landing pad dead ahead, General.
Karag: So I see, lucky they havn't detected us yet.

[Meanwhile on the Avatar Platform]
Sith Sergeant: Sir your plan is working, they will be here any minute and then......
Malakai Hologram: [glow=red,2,300]Do not attack yet, wait untill they have split up then take the Jedi. I want him alive sergeant!
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Karag: Prepare to land

[Karag’s ship lands, and the Rescue transport successfully docks]
Rebel Captain:Sir our troops are deployed and in stealth mode. Shall we start the diversion?
Karag: Yes but be extra careful, I sence a disturbance in the force.........
Rebel Captain: Yes sir, Delta group sweep the north corridor, Alpha team stay with me. (points at two solders) you two stay here
[all soldiers reply with “Yes, sir!” or “Right away, captain!” They carry out their orders. The soldiers tend to think that their plan is working perfectly, but what they do not realize is…is that they fell into a trap]

Karag: Oh, I have a bad feeling about this!



Karag: Whats going on down there, trooper?...trooper?!?!

[An old confederacy Super Battle Droid comes out. With very advanced modifications. Like if it were some sort of tank, blew through both squads of Rebel Alliance Elite Troopers]

Karag: Sith Spit!



Karag: Troppers defend the transport....AND MY FIGHTER at all costs. I gotta find the vilage mans wife and rescuse some wookies. Thankgod I still have some bowcasters left..


Rebel Sergeant: Can I come to sir?
Karag: Trooper it may be dangerous!
Rebel Sergeant: I feel up to it.
Karag: Good man, lets go, not much time left.
Rebel Sergeant: (enthusiasticly) YES SIR!

[Karag and the Sergeant run down the corridor to the detention blocks, and find wookiees in them, including the girl.]

Karag: What would the sith want with wooki's?
Sergeant: I have no idea, sir.
Karag: Lets find the nearest console, we must free them.
Sergeant: I can hack into that power conduit.....and free them
Karag: Good work solder, I'll cover you
Sergeant: Lets do this!

[Karag activates his light saber in a defensive form. Trandoshans and Sith with swords and sabers come from everywhere. Including rifle infantry and anti-armor. Karag never seen a massive force that big before- Well, except when he went back to Coruscant and found the Temple in ruins.]

Karag: Er...done yet?
Sergeant: Yer, hold a minute
Karag: Hurry, they are sending their heavy units
Super Battle Droid 1: Get the JEDI!
Super Battle Droid 2: Roger, roger!
Karag: ....er....done yet.
Sergeant: Got it!....all stations go!

[The prisoners are unleashed and follow Karag and the sergeant to the ships. The woman also is in the protection of the wookiees. Lasers fly and keep flying until the prisoners including the woman are on board the transport]

Karag: Go, I repeat go thats a order, I still have things to do, JUST GO

[The ship flies off…….and Karag is left behind to do his unfinished business.]

[End scene]



Enjoy my brethren! Scene 2 tomorrow or later tonight.

[Yadal]

Scene 2: Battle through the Corridors and the Destruction of the Avatar Platform

[As the transport flew off to jump to Dathomir, Karag is already making his way down the corridors of the station towards the Control Room, slicing through Droids, Sith, and Trandoshan slavers. But he is getting slower only because the defenses are getting tighter, with worse enemies being thrown at him, heck he blew through two old Federation Armored Assault Tanks, only with his speed and saber techniques. He’s starting to realize that there is a big operation going on.]

Karag: Whats with all these confedarcy droids.
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Droid Commander: General, Jedi located, he is in corridor 365 and advancing on our possition.
(Hologram) Malakai: Lord vader's prediction was correct, he is heading straight for your trap!
Droid Commander: Yes, sir.
(Hologram) Malakai: My old mentor grows weak, commander ready my ship, lets go and prepare the end of the trap

[The battles continue in the hallways, hangars, and security offices. Karag is fighting his way toward the control room in search of his old apprentice….and….something else. Karag is disturbed in the force by this inhuman object he is detecting. What was it??!]

Karag: [Karag thinks, “I sense a disturbance in the force.”]
I haven’t felt anything as painful as this through the force before……what’s causing this... OWW… [Karag grasps his chest tight] Must continue, must resuce people

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[Hologram] Malakai: My master still grows weak, this plan is perfect. We can almost spring the trap
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Karag:Im still cutting through them all, somthing isnt right